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« Thread Started on Sept 13, 2006, 3:52pm » | |
-i am sorry if this thread is crappeh. I'm trying my best to be a wolf and not a horse or summat, lol
also this is guna be sorta like my sample only i'll make it longer and diffrent, well try-
Eternity prowled through the undergrowth. It was an eerie day the fog ahead of her covered the ground like a thick blanket. She looked left and then right, growling lightly. She was guessing were she was going. It was hard in this thick fog to see and she just wanted a nice warm place to have a nights sleep. There was a crack behind her and she turned sharply, growling at whatever was following her. It was them, she started to run, panting as she went along. She couldn't see where she was going she didn't care she had to get away. She stumbled down a ditch and fell on her side. She flet a sharp pain surge through her leg and felt the warm blood but picked herself up and continued to run.
After what seemed for hours she stopped and stood panting for breath, her leg hurt from the run and was still bleeding. She looked aroundher. The fog had gotten lighter and wasn't as thick but she didn't notcie anything. she wlak forward a bit more turning her head and looking around. She was lost and now more scared then before...
-hope thats ok-
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« Reply #1 on Sept 13, 2006, 6:40pm » | |
[crivinity, could you please stop posting in the entrance threads. I'm sorry if i sound obnoxious, but this is my pack, and I choose who goes in and out]
He had been watching.
He had been deer-hunting, foolishly alone, yes, but so had been the deer. A young stag, antlers barely formed. he had looked like an easy catch. Not so, apparently. He had given chase. he didn';t know why, after a few miles, he had not simply just given up. But it had been exhilerating. He had responcibilities now, being alpha, staying so constantly near his pack, but- but, just that chance, to stumble through wherever, whenever, with no sense of place or time, mind narrow to this meat before him, was something he had once adored so.
He had seen her at the beginning. The deer had gotten away miles back, but he had continued, to see where wanderlust took him. There was a smell in the air- a smell of invasion and death. He had not stopped to investigate. Instead, following this one, up-wind of her so she would not know of his presence. He was the light-footing stalker he was when he hunted. But he liked the look of her, and had almost subconciously been trying to keep her going. He would fall back and howl like a wolf in chase if she began to slow, growl from within the undergrowth if she started to fall to one side. he wanted her. And when she was safe within his territory, he waited for the perfect moment to stop her dead, there. So he was shocked when she stopped of her own accord- but pleased. So he left the undergrowth when she stopped, feeling exhilerated from the hours of chase, if a little tired.
Welcome here, fae. You are injured, I see- what brings you from the lost lands to this place?
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« Reply #2 on Sept 13, 2006, 6:58pm » | |
She glanced round after hearing a voice and retreated a few steps back, startled and ascared, not her usual self. 'i seem to...to be l..l..lost', she stammered. Finding it hard to get the right tunes out of herself. She looked at the ground a pool of blood circled her paw, it hurt alot now she had stopped. She lifted it from the ground and lt the blood drip slowly. Keeping it off the ground made it hurt less. She couldn't think of anythign else o say and wanted to turn and run but her paw hurt to much.
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